Sunday, February 13, 2011

Thinking About You;)

I'm thinking about you like oreos think about milk. Like cars think about driving. I'm thinking about you. I'm thinking about you like keys think about typing. Like keys think about unlocking. Like keys think about playing. I'm thinking about you like eyes think about seeing. Like seeing thinks about knowing. I'm thinking about you like death thinks about life. Like a caring husband thinks about his wife. I'm thinking about you like I'm thinking about the next words to type. Like valentine lovers think about romance. Like skin thinks about touch. I'm thinking about you like an unfocused teen can't think of anything to write next because all she can think about is YOU. I'm thinking about you like a swimsuit thinks about summer. Like mondays think about sweats. Like a runner thinks about the finish line. I'm thinking about you like my lungs think about air. Like a skater thinks about getting air. I'm thinking about you like Lady Gaga thinks about being unique. Like you're thinking about someone else. I'm thinking about you.

6 comments:

  1. "Like your thinking about someone else.I'm thinking about you. "
    i liked this line, because i had to pause and think about it a little.

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  2. I love this post it has some rhythm to it and a good variety of lines, one of my favorites is, "...I'm thinking about you like keys think about typing. Like keys think about unlocking. Like keys think about playing..." I like how took one word and changed the meaning of it.

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  3. "I'm thinking about you like an unfocused teen can't think of anything to write next because all she can think about is YOU." I like this line because it makes me think I might not be the only person who does that. High school can be the worst sometimes!

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  4. Amen to the one that says, "Like Mondays think about sweats." You couldn't be more right about that!

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  5. Like the whole piece, how you like played with words. Sometimes they rhymed, sometimes there were the same words in the beginning of your sentences.

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  6. "like your thinking about someone else." blew my mind, added an unexpected and heartbreaking twist at the end.

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